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I tried to Draw protoman
« on: April 06, 2006, 11:17:16 AM »


What you guys think?
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Re: I tried to Draw protoman
« Reply #1 on: April 07, 2006, 03:49:16 PM »
I think you need to resize that xbox-hueg image for those that don't have broadband. I *do* and it took several seconds to load. :P

As to the image itself, um. Not bad. Most certainly better than I can do (ever wonder why I started a *sprite*comic? :P). If I had to critique something, I'd say the mouth should be a bit lower - about halfway between the nose and the chin. Make the nose a liiittle bit bigger, too. Also, the jawline needs to curve upward a bit toward where it meets the helmet. His face looks a little misshapen the way it is.

Sorry if I seem overcritical or anything. Just givin' a few pointers, not trying to trash it or whatnot.
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Re: I tried to Draw protoman
« Reply #2 on: April 08, 2006, 07:28:05 AM »
i apreciate any comments that may help me get better :)
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Re: I tried to Draw protoman
« Reply #3 on: May 13, 2006, 05:30:15 PM »
Nose & Mouth is a bit funny, but the rest is pretty good.
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