The Unoriginal Comic

General Category => General Discussion => Topic started by: Kiza on April 06, 2006, 11:17:16 AM

Title: I tried to Draw protoman
Post by: Kiza on April 06, 2006, 11:17:16 AM

(http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/3218/protoman5vr.png)

What you guys think?

Title: Re: I tried to Draw protoman
Post by: Tunod Denrub on April 07, 2006, 03:49:16 PM

I think you need to resize that xbox-hueg image for those that don't have broadband. I *do* and it took several seconds to load. :P

As to the image itself, um. Not bad. Most certainly better than I can do (ever wonder why I started a *sprite*comic? :P). If I had to critique something, I'd say the mouth should be a bit lower - about halfway between the nose and the chin. Make the nose a liiittle bit bigger, too. Also, the jawline needs to curve upward a bit toward where it meets the helmet. His face looks a little misshapen the way it is.

Sorry if I seem overcritical or anything. Just givin' a few pointers, not trying to trash it or whatnot.

Title: Re: I tried to Draw protoman
Post by: Kiza on April 08, 2006, 07:28:05 AM

i apreciate any comments that may help me get better :)

Title: Re: I tried to Draw protoman
Post by: Senretsu on May 13, 2006, 05:30:15 PM

Nose & Mouth is a bit funny, but the rest is pretty good.