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Comics => The Unoriginal Comic => Topic started by: Celedh on February 21, 2016, 02:21:03 PM

Title: The Author's New Groove - Perspectives!
Post by: Celedh on February 21, 2016, 02:21:03 PM
(http://theunoriginalcomic.overminddl1.com/images/censoredcel.png)A slow comic overall, just there to have fun putting Gundams together in choregraphy. For what's possible with 4 panels anyway.

The fun part is making sure that X's head was on each of them, and sometimes had to work around the shoulders or the orientation of the head. Like the first one you can see most of the back of X's head, just putting the same head wouldn't work. Same with the last panel, where the head is opposite of the rest of the body due to the blow. It's all in the details sometimes.

Around this comic, Ayasu also made the comment that I was handling the perspective and backgrounds pretty well. More than some of the earlier works of TUC anyway (http://theunoriginalcomic.com/?comic=19). Still gotta work on the writing though, Ayasu's constantly spellchecking and proofreading to make sure I got everything down right, like what would characters say, or personality wise.

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Title: Re: The Author's New Groove - Perspectives!
Post by: Seraya on March 02, 2016, 08:29:27 PM
Y'know, Celedh, this (http://theunoriginalcomic.com/?comic=140) battle comic is so well done, I don't think it needs a punchline.